For this exercise I was supposed to pick an activity and sketch it step by step. As I work full time, to save some time, I decided to draw my day any other activities I did wouldn’t have covered at least 20 pages. This does mean that the images don’t flow as well as they should. Time skips very quickly and the subject of the images change drastically. This also doesn’t fully fit the criteria set out in front of me however I feel that I have still learnt from this exercise.
Putting these images together I found that it is easy to make the story feel disjointed. The size, shape and subject can affect how the story will feel and flow. I found this as one of my images was originally portrait. I had to crop it so that it would fit with the other images and not ruin how smoothly it ran. I also found when resizing the images to 12x6cm that they more closely resembled the point of few as it cut out what was seen on the edges of my vision.
The large jumps of time in my images don’t allow the viewer to lose themselves and get sucked into the story. It does document my day well but doesn’t make for a good comic. Some of the images were drawn from memory and others from photos that I took for reference. I think it’s fairly clear which is which. I tried to draw things as I saw them, including my hand if that is what I saw.
I chose the image from Buffy as I was most attracted to it. The visual style of the image influenced how I drew the other images. I know the style was meant to be kept simple but it didn’t make sense and would have looked off to not keep to the same style.
I chose to make my character a bartender as this made the most sense since the setting is a bar. I did find ignoring where the image came from and not following the story difficult as my mind would fill in the blanks.
I wanted to make clear who the bartender is so the jump in the panels are the result of fitting some back story in. I started with him on his break. I feel that the fact that you see him smoking tells you a fair amount about his character and then the image of the toddler on the phone gives a bit of back story and knowledge about his life. I also wanted to show that he is tired, through the bags under his eyes, to add more context.
From here I would like to show the character going home to his family and expanding on his life beyond his work. I feel like they may be struggling financially and that he may have a second job.
Place and Atmosphere: The comic is set in the city. Bolton, judging by the sign. It seems to be in chaos. It’s night time. We can see that it is windy due to the paper flying around. It is raining. The light is on, so someone is awake.
Panel Progression: From the second panel we can tell that the setting is inside a studio. More details are made clear from zooming in. We can also see that the phone has been ringing for a long time, suggesting that something has kept it from being answered. The bang in the third panel is very ominous and captures the imagination. What happened still isn’t made clear in the fourth panel. What we can see is that whatever caused the bang is at the back of the studio, nowhere near the man asleep in the other room. The room is a mess and the man appears to be laid across an upturned table. We can’t tell if he is asleep or dead. The whole scene lends to the idea that he has been overworked.
How sound adds information: The sounds tell us that the phone is ringing. By appearing in multiple panels it tells us that the phone the phone has been ringing for a long time. The bang tells us that something has gone wrong. Possibly that something has blown up. We can see that this bang has come from the back room.
How is weather created and how does it add atmosphere?: The night is made clear by the black background. Wind is made clear by the flying paper. Rain is created by the white lines across the panels. We can also see the pools of rain on the roof. The dramatically dark sky gives a sense of danger. The flying paper gives the idea that you could be hit by a rogue piece any second. The rain also makes the night seem dreary and a place you wouldn’t want to be.
For this exercise I had to draw the establishing shot from 20 movies/tv shows.
Here’s what I ended up with:
Seeing all the images together like this really brings attention to how different each image is and all the possibilities that a story can start with.
Most of the shows/movies I chose to use were found on Netflix. I tried to vary the genre so as to get a selection that shows range.
I found drawing the main focus and larger details easier. The images with finer details were a lot harder. It was too easy to loose track of which details had been added. They did make for a beautiful picture though.
Moods are established quickly through the images. For example, the image from Gilmore Girls exudes calm and peace but the image from Modern Family gives the feeling of busyness and laughter.
Information is also fed to us from the first image as it informs us of the place, time and weather. Others things aren’t as clear and the finer details are usually needed to be able to discern them, like what year the show/movie is set in.
My favourite of all the images is the one from Buffy. This is because of the large contrast in light. This just seems to attract me.
This assignment looked at time and how it can affect perspective.
I have found that different seasons and the weather they bring have a large impact on how we can view the same space. Colour and the amount of shadow are changed. Colours can be made lighter or darker and shadows can be made longer and shorter. The shade of colour can also seem to change depending on how much light there is and whether it is in direct sunlight. Texture can also look different. Stronger light can highlight details that we don’t notice in duller light. This can make things appear rougher than they are.
In the images above I have tried to showcase the differences that can be brought on through time. I have created a simple scene of an apple on a table inside a room. I thought that having the apple rot in front of the eyes would be an obvious and easy way to show that time is passing. Within the drawings the apple darkens in colour and shrivels up as it dries out. For this task I chose to use markers and ink. This was interesting as I don’t use these materials very often and mixing colour didn’t seem to work as well as with paint. Getting the smaller details in was also difficult as I was using a brush that wasn’t thin enough and controlling the long the bristle is a task within itself.
Outside the window is a cherry blossom tree. I chose this tree as it is my favourite, though it probably wasn’t the best choice as it is bare for most of the year. The tree does show time however as in the spring it is full of cherry blossoms and as the year moves along the bark darkens, although it is slightly lighter during the summer. During the winter there is snow resting on the branches.
The changing season can also be seen through the window. The weather changes are displayed through brighter colours, darker colours, rain and snow. The colour of the grass also changes.
I have used the pictures on the back wall to reflect the changing seasons. This isn’t realistic as the colours wouldn’t really change however I used this as a metaphorical way to show the progressing time. They also come in handy as they produce shadow. Here I can use the pictures to display the differing length of shadow produced from different weathers and light.
The furniture in the room also differs through the year. Sometimes the furniture seems lighter and other times it is darker, caused by duller weather and more shadow.
I have also considered the light of the room as a whole. The colours of the walls and the floor are darker in the winter and lighter in the summer. This is intentional as things seem duller during the winter due to over cast weather. Darkening the colours didn’t work as smoothly as I’d hoped. The wall in the winter looks rougher as a result of my attempt to mix the markers.
I have added a blanket to the winter scene as this is a common sight during this season due to the cold weather. The markers seemed to fit the texture of the material.
For this task I had to find examples of different visual conventions used to convey time and/or place/space.
The first piece I thought of was Eadweard Muybridge’s The Horse in Motion, which shows film stills that show a horse running.
Whilst looking for the above image I came across an old invention, the Zoetrope, invented by William George Horner in 1831. This used by spinning it and the images inside tell a story by spinning the images inside.
Time can be seen represented as far back as the stone age through cave paintings. These works go back as far as 30,000 years.
Jean Morin’s Memento Mori is an interesting representation of time as it’s a still life, so there isn’t a visual timeline to follow.
Time is shown in the image by the falling petals and the skull. There is also an object that looks more like a compass to me but must be a pocket watch. The symbolism in the image is what tells the story and takes us through time.
Comic strips use a good method of showing the passing of time. Different panels show stages of time, so multiple panels are able to communicate a detailed story. The above comic strip is Gasoline Alley by Frank King. The use of many panels paired with the dialogue effectively communicate the story to the reader.
Whilst researching for this task I came to the conclusion that visual conventions of time/space/place are all just ways of telling a story. Whether the methods are simple or complex, in the end, after viewing the image, a story would have been revealed.
Stories have been documented in many ways and through multiple materials.
Above is a Chinese bronze mirror telling the story of a war between Wu and Yue, two states. I find that the material used also helps locate the time and place of a story as ancient story telling seems to have been done largely through tougher materials such as stone and metal. Through these works we can also see how the styles used today have been developed. An example of this would be scrolls painted in Japan. From these scrolls you can see the influences used in manga.
With the development of technology creating visual representations of space is getting easier. One way of doing this is through 3D art.
The above image is a 3D image that shows a room. It effectively represents the space of the through the perspective presented. By carefully picking which angle to show the room from the depth is made clear and the viewer can easily see the amount of space and the direction it goes in.
Doing this in the past has been a lot harder as the methods and technology we have available to us now wasn’t available. One way space has been shown before is through blue prints, which represents the space in a basic way. Photography is also a good way to show this.
The image above does this in an interesting way. The perspective is completely skewed so that the people inside look as though they are walking on the walls. The space is also enhanced by them being stood on, what seems to be glass. This elongates the corridor and adds depth to the image.
The visual representation of space in an image relies of the visual perspective seen by the eye. This has to be replicated in the image to make it recognisable to the brain, which creates the illusion of space on a 2D picture.
Depth can be added to an image by adding shade and highlights.
Leonardo da Vinci did this well as evidenced above in Last Supper. Here he created space by darkening the background and using the linear perspective method. By creating space in an image it helps identify the location. More details are able to be added, allowing the viewer to know where the image takes place.
I found the process of researching for this task difficult. Finding terms search was harder than expected as I would end up finding what I wasn’t looking for. I tried finding books that I could use for the task however because I didn’t know what to search under I didn’t have much luck. What I did find came from finding one result and then a string of images and search terms came to mind. Lots of them ended up without giving me what I was looking for but from there I was able to rephrase and narrow down what I needed.
For this exercise I took a photograph that I had taken and turned it into an A3 drawing. From here I had to photo copy the drawing and create a few different versions of it: one using black fine liner, one using a bottle of ink and one adding colour. I used coloured pencils.
The original photo:
I chose this image as I liked the 50s architecture and it has plenty details to meet the brief.
The original drawing:
Fine liner:
Here I used hatching, cross hatching and stippling. These are all methods I tend to forget about yet they work so well. I was impressed by just how much detail and depth can be given to image by just using these techniques. I felt that the hatching and cross hatching better fit the building but stippling felt more natural and a better fit for people. Stippling would have probably been better for the trees as well. I tried not to over do it. Adding finer details were harder, like the details in the sky as doing so would bring the sky into the foreground since it is harder to differentiate foreground and background when using pen. Over all I did enjoy shading this way.
Ink:
This was the hardest medium to use as controlling the amount of ink that went onto the page was harder than expected. The lack of control I had can be seen in the image above. I like the dramatic effect the contrast gives. Adding a gradual shade is harder with ink. You could try smudging the ink but this risks ruining the picture. Ink is very easy to smudge, as can been seen in the areas I did so by accident. I found that thicker strokes made the image look more shaded. I left the background blank again as it would have been hard to discern the background from the foreground, like with the pen. Using a dry brush may have helped add a gradient of shade as the flow of ink wouldn’t have been as smooth but I didn’t think of this at the time.
Colour:
I used pencil to add colour. This was the medium I preferred. I like how the colour can add life to the image. Colour also makes it easier to differentiate between the back and foregrounds. This medium is easier to work with and you can make it as sharp or blurred as you like as it is softer than the previous materials. I tried to keep the colours in line with the era in the image and used a palette that would fit a 50s/60s poster. I used coloured fine liner sparingly to add more depth to the pencil and define some areas. This worked well to separate one part of the image from another.
Pencil and fine liner were the easiest to control. The fine liner was the easiest material to use when needing neat, thin lines. Pencil was the best when trying to add life and gradual shading. I liked the strong colour and punchy effect given by ink. Ink is also the best for quick coverage. Creating thin lines with this was near impossible. This makes ink the best choice when needing to cover a large space with the same colour, e.g. a car. Pen and pencil are better for finer details.
For this exercise I chose to research the 50s as it’s a decade I feel connected to. I used the internet and things I saw personally as material.
People and clothes
Architecture and Interior
Design
Transport and Engineering
Pop Culture
After this I had to create an illustration using the reference photos of 2 people on a street corner. The image also had to show elements of my chosen time period, the 50s.
I think that the idea behind this image was better than the result. I like the chiaroscuro effect created in the image. I have used light to draw attention to some areas. This is used to highlight different aspects of the 50s hiding within the picture. I took inspiration from Britain and the USA as I believe that this creates a better representation of the influence America has had over culture. I think the the style of the image shows an influence from Mary Blair after a past exercise.
Here are a couple other layouts I thought of, before choosing the one above:
The idea behind this one was that a long Highstreet continued down a hill and that you could continue to see it off in the distance. I felt that this looked too long and didn’t create an attractive picture as there wouldn’t be a lot in most of the image.
I didn’t like this one either. I didn’t feel that I could fit enough in the image to meet the breif.
50s from a visual perspective:
The 50s was overtaken by bright pastel colours. The era tried to hide any signs of the war that had just ended. Chic, glamourous clothing and bright, joyful imagery was used to gloss over the tragedies caused by the past 6 years. This was also a time of new technology, which could be seen everywhere. Enviable celebrities were all over the place, whether on tv, on the street or on the big screen. Luminescent signs could be seen on the streets. Golden haired beauties were in abundance. There were buildings inspired by space and cars that were sleek and beautiful.
Although there were many bright and wonderful things about the 50s there was also the flip side where the war had created panic and anxiety. There was still suspicion of spies and communists roaming the streets as evidenced by the blacklisting of suspected communists, Like Harry Trumbo and Arthur Miller, who had to appear in court to defend themselves. The remains of bomb shelters could be seen and advertising was used as a way to frighten and influence. Drab colours were used to inspire negative emotions and garner anger amongst the masses. Misogynistic and racist imagery could also be seen around in magazines and on TV.
Here I had 40 characters to design. I was given a list to start me off but then I had to come up with character ideas myself. I ended up with:
During this exercise I noticed that my drawings got worse about half way through. I think this is because I had been drawing for a long time and lost patience. The brief asked me to draw the characters with pencil. I tried to do this however I wasn’t able to draw them with enough detail to my satisfaction at such a small scale. To fix this I drew in Photoshop. Here I was able to draw as I would with pencil and rescale the sketches.
My sketches were fairly simple. I used angular shapes and simple lines to suggest details. The hands I drew are just suggested as empty shapes that vaguely resemble hands. This is because the details in hands are harder to draw, especially at such a small size. I liked leaving the eyes blank as they didn’t over complicate things and over crowd he face. Depth could be added to the eyes with shading and colour. My work on proportion and clothing needs improving. The creases in the clothing don’t match how where they would appear in reality, so they make the sketches look awkward and ruins the feeling of flow. The costume designs also weren’t very original. I tried not to create stereotypical sketches and go with what felt natural when designing the characters, while still making them recognisable. Although simple I think colour would help the sketches look more lively and detailed.
For the second part of this exercise I had to draw one of my characters into the empty space of the above panel. I chose the courier as I felt that it was the most developed (though at the time of drawing the character my mind blanked on the motor part and just registered the cycling part). I added a short “delivery!” to make clear that the character is a courier and add a little narrative to the images. I didn’t feel anything else was needed to make clear what was happening.
Of all the images I have viewed during this task I like this one the most, by B Kilban. The most obvious draw for me is that the subject is a cat. I am both impressed and disgusted by the image. I like the style and the concept; however, I find the lyrics to the song hard to like, even though it is funny. This is because I like mice. I have very contradictory feelings when looking at this image.
I think that the style of the cat is cute and that B Kilban did a good job of creating a human anamorphic cat. The simple style makes a nice clean, easy to read image that doesn’t take the brain long to figure out. The colours are nice and bright, creating a light mood to the scene. The lyrics are clever and the scene reminds me of Phoebe Buffay from Friends. The lyrics are a big part of the joke as it uses the fact that cats have a love/hate relationship with mice. They love to chase them but also love to eat them.